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#1 Six Percent Girl

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Posted 30 September 2015 - 02:14 PM

What this is:

A thinspo novella I wrote in sections in the Thinspo Picture Stories thread.

 

THERE IS NOW A PDF

It has been attached, if it doesn't work for you, please let me know and I'll fix it.

I'm considering figuring out to convert it into something kindles can read, or epub format as well, since then it can be read on more devices (and a lot of you peeps keep thinspo on your phone) so if anyone wants that lemme knowAttached File  FB.pdf   269.37KB   391 downloads


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5'7" [] hw: 152 [] cw: 125-ish [] lw: 110.2 [] gw1: 120 [] gw2: 115 [] gw3: 110

ugw: 100

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I use a pharmacy scale now, forgive my inexact measurements

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#2 delicately.breathing

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Posted 20 March 2016 - 02:02 PM

Pleeeeease put the link in!


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#3 Six Percent Girl

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Posted 31 May 2016 - 11:25 PM

There's a pDF now if anyone wants it


5'7" [] hw: 152 [] cw: 125-ish [] lw: 110.2 [] gw1: 120 [] gw2: 115 [] gw3: 110

ugw: 100

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I use a pharmacy scale now, forgive my inexact measurements

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#4 fragile-crescent

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Posted 01 June 2016 - 11:40 AM

what is it, sorry im unsure?


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I do it exceptionally well.

I do it so it feels like hell

I do it so it feels real.' 

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#5 fragile-crescent

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Posted 01 June 2016 - 11:41 AM

oh I understand, its a novella, it lovely. well done <3


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4"11 (I'm short)

CW: 39kg

TW: 38/35/32...

insta: _nach.x_

​'Dying is an art, like everything else.

I do it exceptionally well.

I do it so it feels like hell

I do it so it feels real.' 

~ Sylvia Plath ~


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Posted 02 June 2016 - 05:58 PM

<3
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Posted 16 June 2016 - 05:04 PM

I honestly love this novella. It's really amazingly written.
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#8 delicately.breathing

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Posted 18 June 2016 - 11:58 PM

Thank you!


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Posted 20 June 2016 - 03:16 PM

Yaay! found it ^0^ it's almost summer but who cares this story is great for any time


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#10 the Ten of Eyes

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Posted 20 June 2016 - 05:08 PM

It's so unique and a great read. Great job!
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LW: 100.3 LBS


CW: 108 LBS


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Formerly: Where Did Your Heart Go? and Where Is You Heart?

#11 ImNotHungryThanks

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Posted 15 July 2016 - 09:57 AM

Ahh yay! Thanks for making this! I remember checking every day to see if you'd written the next chapter yet.

Also, anyone with a kindle, you can usually convert PDFs automatically (I have a 1st gen and it does it with some maneuvering, so later ones should as well)
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Highest weight: 185
Lowest weight(at this height): 140
Goal weight: 120 and fit

 

I got fat again, and I can't tell if this is recovery or just a happier sort of disorder. 

 

The forest is lovely, dark and deep, but I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep, and miles to go before I sleep.


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Posted 15 July 2016 - 09:57 AM

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Posted 17 July 2016 - 10:01 AM

This is really well written! You're very talented, and you very very successfully created a whole supernatural world in a short space. It's very pretty and you have a lovely imagination. Your main character was really well developed, believable, and almost relatable. 

 

The only criticism i could possibly find is to maybe flesh out your "villains" a bit more? Andrews mother, her parents, etc. However, you did do this with Courtney quite well. 

 

How long did you spend on this, if you know? 


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ugw: ethereal forest fairy

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#14 Six Percent Girl

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Posted 19 July 2016 - 03:27 AM

This is really well written! You're very talented, and you very very successfully created a whole supernatural world in a short space. It's very pretty and you have a lovely imagination. Your main character was really well developed, believable, and almost relatable. 

 

The only criticism i could possibly find is to maybe flesh out your "villains" a bit more? Andrews mother, her parents, etc. However, you did do this with Courtney quite well. 

 

How long did you spend on this, if you know? 

A couple months total, I believe. I can go back and check the post dates for the first and last sections. If I ever go back and write more to the world I'll definitely give more character to the other antagonists, since in rereads I did notice they're a bit flat. There's also some scenes I'd do a bit differently to tie everything together more neatly, but hindsight is 20/20.

Your criticism is quite helpful, thank you!


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ugw: 100

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Posted 30 September 2016 - 09:18 AM

Bless you ;-; this is my fourth time rereading it.

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Posted 06 October 2016 - 12:21 PM

As a fellow writer, I'm really impressed by this novella! Really beautiful prose and imagery, Six Percent Girl, and your novella has a really strong voice. Also, your characters were really engaging, and I genuinely enjoyed reading your dialogue. (So jealous. Dialogue is the very bane of my writer's existence!)



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Posted 23 July 2019 - 07:01 PM

Bump. I still love this. Make any new fiction lately?


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Posted 28 July 2019 - 11:27 PM

that's really really good



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Posted 12 August 2021 - 11:49 AM

this is my ‘fall is coming’ comfort book :’)
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Posted 25 August 2021 - 01:07 PM

I’m LOVING reading this so far!!


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